I hope, therefore I am.

May 12, 2010

The vibrant hum of escape

Filed under: Life,Poetry,Renewed hope — Teal @ 10:49 PM

Here goes my first ever 3ww entry 🙂

The lady slave in her mobile grave

Crawled and slithered – trapped, enslaved

As her impending doom , around did cape

Her mind yearned for an escape

Onto the water is her glance , transfixed,

a vibrant dream –  sans glum and mist

but the fountain of fate did regurgitate a spurt

Broke open her grave! Uprooted the spud!

Off she ran to her brave new world

where the bees did hum, in full fervor

All that remained along the runaway

withering defeated wails – along the fading facade



  1. cute.

    Comment by Jingle — November 5, 2010 @ 11:52 PM | Reply

  2. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/

    welcome to attend Poets Rally, link in a poem, visit and comment, have fun!
    Thanks a ton for the attention.
    Let me know if you have questions.

    Comment by Jingle — November 5, 2010 @ 11:52 PM | Reply

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